I really like the concept! The idea of a game that's not finished, and the creator talking to you and "fixing" the game in real time, and wanting it to be the next big thing while not really caring about the project to release it in a finished state. It's a good parody of game developers who do that. I also liked the comedy, but I feel it could be improved in a few places.
The only bad thing about it is, it's too accurate to games that are bad, but besides that it's great!